Wrong

It was the erring of my song
not that my fate was still.
Oh truth, some absence there belong
while all the buttress nil!

Encourage so, the struggle's row
lest I become among
the solid hope, that cannot cope
but wishes, wishes ~ wrong!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 16, 2013 at 8:22 AM
This was excellently written. A capturing of the consequences that occur when we believe in something that we shouldn't have. At least, that's how I read this one. :) Again, great job!
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