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Written Therapy

I am just a beginner
A newbie as some would put it
Why would you read my poems?
They lack impressiveness 

I rarely write well
I only do it to express my feelings out
So why bother your time reading these?
When all of you are ten times better than me

I am not saying I'm giving up
But I just started, so it will be time
Before I become someone of value
Just you wait..

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Jay Loveless

May 26, 2009 at 11:41 AM

I will wait, and i hope you dont give up. because i started just as you did. its my way of expression. dont doubt yourself so much, this poem is laced with it. that, in a way, is good, it shows emotion through words. dont give up and one day you will be brilliant like the brightest most beautiful star. ~Jese

Yoni Dvorkis

May 25, 2009 at 8:52 PM

Actually my reason would be really really simple. I value the honesty you just expressed infinitely more than any work judged as 'brilliant' by a critic. I started doing this in January. I've never written a damn thing my whole life. Out of the 75 poems I have here on the site, I think I actually like maybe 20 of them, on a good day. On a bad day I feel like a hack clamoring for attention. Like I said, I value honesty...

Cecil Hickman

May 25, 2009 at 8:20 PM

true poems come from within and true talent shows from feelings in the words written,all the other things are just forms and styles to which to write into,,kepp on writing and I can see that you have ,,blessings..Cecil