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Written On Sep 11 2001

Dismissing evil and good Upright and smiling he stood; Materialistically modern in mood Filled full with rationalist food; Denying inherent sin Liberally enlighten within. Dismissing evil and good Puffed-up self approving he stood Pursuing illusory appeal With academic assumptions so unreal; Denying inherent sin So liberally enlightened within. Dismissing evil and good All-seeing,all-knowing he stood; An idealistic ego Coupled his elitist credo Denying inherent sin Liberally enlightened within. Until a September morn When his teachings lay shattered Tattered,torn and forlorn; One fell blow sacrificed his sacred cow Leaving him,his philosophy Just nowhere to go. A RESPONSE (Written Sept 2001 ) Year Posted 2007

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Date: 9/11/2021 2:37:00 PM
Brian, wonderful writing and reminder of those who caused so much senseless loss of life on Sept 11 ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/12/2021 1:01:00 AM
A reminder of evil Costance,amongst the wokery
Date: 9/11/2021 9:27:00 AM
A deep and thought provoking verse Brian, do they actually believe that God condones their evil actions. Tom
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/11/2021 10:01:00 AM
Yes Tom an indeible day on memories ,the same as Kennedy '63
Date: 9/11/2021 7:09:00 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you, Brian. Love, Gina
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/11/2021 8:40:00 AM
Yes Gina,it still remains true 2 decades on(sadly plus ca change)
Date: 9/11/2021 6:22:00 AM
Wow! Especially the final stanza!
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/11/2021 8:39:00 AM
Yes Kim,20 years ago & the thrust of it remains true

Book: Shattered Sighs