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Written in the Wrong Key

I've written Sonnets in C Major key ~ funeral music to me No notes on bars in flats or sharps ~ fingered morbidly sour on stringed harps

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2024 5:25:00 PM

Fascinating to me, Lin, as I enjoy playing in C major key on the piano. The melodies are usually joyous, at least to my untrained ear. Thanks for igniting some thoughts and memories. ~ Gershon

Lin Lane
Date: 4/21/2024 11:30:00 PM

Honestly, GW I wouldn't know a C major from an F sharp. Thanks for welcoming the spark.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/21/2024 4:56:00 PM

this was a unique but delightful Monoku, Lin. I've written a few things in the wrong key as well. Can relate. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 4/21/2024 11:29:00 PM

I'm not sure where the idea to write two originated. It happens that way sometimes. Thanks, Sara.