Written In the Stars

Even if our destiny is written in the stars nothing will come to pass if our souls do not concur!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
      05 March 2017

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Maria Williams

March 6, 2017 at 7:38 AM

My soul will bypass the stars and head for the moon. Wise words though.

Supraja Kannan

March 6, 2017 at 12:43 AM

Wise thought... Nicely written....

Tim Smith

March 5, 2017 at 11:44 AM

Such truth can be heard in your words...terrific Demetrios

Gary Bateman

March 5, 2017 at 6:39 AM

Hallo Herr Professor!! A most excellent Monoku. I agree wholeheartedly that the "Soul Concurrence" is vital for sure. Without that, it doesn't matter what the stars say. (I just posted a new Lyric poem, by the way, that you might be interested in: "It Your Time.") I'm glad to see you're regularly posting poems. I drop in and out of Poetry Soup presently as I'm buried in writing a second novella for my second book to be released (hopefully) before the end of this year. Best Wishes Always, Gary