Written In the Stars

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WRITTEN IN THE STARS

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 05 MARCH 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Even if our destiny is written in the stars nothing will come to pass if our souls do not concur! © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 March 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/6/2017 7:38:00 AM

My soul will bypass the stars and head for the moon. Wise words though.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/6/2017 12:43:00 AM

Wise thought... Nicely written....

Tim Smith

Date: 3/5/2017 11:44:00 AM

Such truth can be heard in your words...terrific Demetrios

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/5/2017 6:39:00 AM

Hallo Herr Professor!! A most excellent Monoku. I agree wholeheartedly that the "Soul Concurrence" is vital for sure. Without that, it doesn't matter what the stars say. (I just posted a new Lyric poem, by the way, that you might be interested in: "It Your Time.") I'm glad to see you're regularly posting poems. I drop in and out of Poetry Soup presently as I'm buried in writing a second novella for my second book to be released (hopefully) before the end of this year. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/5/2017 5:50:00 AM

How straightaway said without the least demur ... how mighty your words are ... Dear Philosopher ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 4:49:00 AM

- A beautiful thought ... who knows ... maybe it's written in the stars - Lovely written, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)