Written In Blue Mercury

snow falls
as silently as sleep
pressed snowflakes
icicle flowers
between the wind and windowpane
melt their way to sill

polished chrome darkness shivers
ankle deep in frost
night’s breath spills
along the  frozen glass
its silver shadow rolls
and condenses with the dawn

night’s epitaph
written in blue mercury
trickles down my windowpane
in the light of a new day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vinson Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 4:00 PM
Hi Forrest. : ) Very nice; really gives the feeling. Quite a planet we have.
Pasky Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Doug thanks for the read and comment. Loved your "Of hope not a ray..." Very well-structured line.
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