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Arjun should stay, no way That Krishna can say Or even then they all shed blood On Kuru-ground as in game of war And we cannot get Srigita yet

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:40:00 PM

Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder,,, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:15:00 AM

Ashraf, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ashraf-Ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:24:00 AM

thanks, very very nice of you

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/5/2014 12:20:00 AM

A very deep powerful piece - excellent write! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Ashraf-Ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:25:00 AM

Thank you so much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2014 12:11:00 PM

Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ashraf-Ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:28:00 AM

Thank you, yes you inspired me

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2014 4:30:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ashraf-ul A.S.- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ashraf-Ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:28:00 AM

Thank you so much