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Arjun should stay, no way That Krishna can say Or even then they all shed blood On Kuru-ground as in game of war And we cannot get Srigita yet

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Date: 4/5/2015 10:40:00 PM
Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder,,, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:17:00 AM
Ashraf.. Powerful, introspective write! Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/11/2014 6:22:00 AM
Thanjs
Date: 10/7/2014 11:15:00 AM
Ashraf, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:24:00 AM
thanks, very very nice of you
Date: 10/5/2014 12:20:00 AM
A very deep powerful piece - excellent write! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:25:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 10/2/2014 12:11:00 PM
Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:28:00 AM
Thank you, yes you inspired me
Date: 10/1/2014 4:30:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ashraf-ul A.S.- I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ashraf-ul Alam Shikder
Date: 10/8/2014 12:28:00 AM
Thank you so much