Writng Blind

it is not the original 5/7/5 pattern ofa haiku but this is my absolute first haiku ever 
you will see the progress i made through my other ones 

blessed with a gift 
writing blind ... 
like a walk in the mist 



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a true writer takes along his blackbook 
so he can write at any place , any time and and any day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Marco, Congratulations on your featured Haiku this week. Sincerely, Moses
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February 8, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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February 8, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Marco. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Robillard Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 12:10 AM
Very very nice. Wish this week that I had that gift. I've been trying to learn fiction writing. All my adequacies are dust. Lovely writing, Marco
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February 7, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Amazing for your first haiku. Doesn't have to be 5-7-5 for an English haiku. I feel blessed to be able to write so I can really relate to you first line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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February 5, 2010 at 2:36 PM
Hi Marco! thank you for your comments!... i agree with Raul! and you! I will begin carryn' a notepad & pen! Best Wishes! jimbo
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September 20, 2009 at 12:57 PM
I carry my pen and paper with me everywhere...Raul
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