Writing With Weeping Words

Writing With Weeping Words
Weeping whatevers and wondering whys The sorrow drip drops from watery eyes The faucet keeps running now 5 long days The pain drop drips in tiny diamond cascades Crying all rivers, streams, oceans, and lakes Red drops fall from my leaking heartache Watering this life as I drown in each drip Eyes blood wide never closing their grip Gasping and heaving still the tears remain Blowing saliva bubbles from my nose in vain Whimpering and whining way out of control In need of Noahs Ark to try and save my soul The last drip slides slowly down lifes essence Drying on the cheek of life's complete sentence
Written for contest: The End of the Forms Series Hosted by Broken Wings 10/07/17
WON 3rd PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Yes Brian, this poem is a winner. It is good to cry. It mends the body. You will heal from that certain event my friend. Have a nice day my friend.
Davey Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Thank you for your kind words and insight both are much appreciated, have a beautiful day
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:20 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Brian ... blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Davey Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brian. Oh, Brian this is so heart breaking.. I hope just a write.. if not blessings that your frowns will turn to smiles. Blessings... Hugs Eve ~`*
Davey Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Thank you Eve and although I would like to say it isn't true but it is about a certain recent events in my life. :-) Thanks again!
La France Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Brian, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write !
Davey Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for another great contest and for my placement
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