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Writing Their Words

These words they wrote Little girl loves, and the little boy too... There's a little girl inside her heart And there's a little boy writing too Desperate for each other's love But for all the grief that they've been through The words brought them together so soon...... There is a chord that's connecting them But it's really just a thread that's bare Much to frayed to bear a load Those times were bad, But what was done and not said All the words that matter bore so many times... Writing their lovely words The need for each other they had, The boy and girl so grand Which they can't seem to admit A continent between them Allows them not to commit.... Just looking inside at who they are Behind their walls erected Taking peeks over the tops Crippled...with words that rippled... They heard their call of love As they rest their heads tonight For in their dreams they would embrace To dance among the moonlight.... Brooke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/15/2014 7:37:00 AM
I love this! What an amazing way you have spoke of long distant lovers, oh beautifully sad and loving.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/15/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Casarah
Date: 5/7/2014 3:45:00 PM
This is so romantic, they may never wish to wake.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/15/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Richard... hugs
Date: 5/7/2014 12:17:00 PM
My dearest Brooke, every poem you write ripples through my body and mind. Yes, we do indeed erect barriers to our true feelings because of the hurt we have suffered. It is sad at the still-born relationships that might have survived -- and thrived even -- if it were not "for all the grief that they've been through". You are indeed a great poet! Luv &Hugs;) Ben
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Ben so nice to see you
Date: 5/7/2014 6:39:00 AM
I have always believed that love can cross continents , Oceans , Mountain ranges and any obstacle put in its path if that love is true . A delight to read , Thanks for sharing.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thank you darren... nice to see you
Date: 5/7/2014 3:42:00 AM
Lovely! The power of words to send us soaring or put us on our knees. Love the line "Crippled with word that rippled" Thank you for your visit to my poetry and your awesome comments.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Monterey... you a e so kind.. I love your poetry..
Date: 5/6/2014 11:51:00 PM
I have just one reaction to this piece after reading it and that's "Om my...it's beautiful..." Great work, Brooke!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/6/2014 11:58:00 PM
wow thanks Jake. you are so kind

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