Writing the Saga of Love

WRITING THE SAGA OF LOVE
Long time ago on the eve of a memorable New Year we met while you lay on the dewed grass of meadow. The soft sun shone on the noon sky, spotless clear, your face glimmered, I could only say,‘wow’. I saw the crimson roses peep at you in envy for your supple cheeks couldn’t be redder. In your eye dreams of our future I could see, you haven’t gone since then out of my radar. Our long journey began from the top spot of bliss, we shared happily whatever from life we did get. The tenet of togetherness we had never taken amiss for we haven’t finished writing sagas of our love yet.
May 7, 2018.
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Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Nicely done, Subimal, congratulations on your Palindromes win... Hugs Eve
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:24 AM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Thank you, Line.
Canerdy Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:54 AM
I absolutely love this--my newest favorite. CONGRATS, Subimal! Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so much, Janice for liking the poem.
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Many congrats Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Sands Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:08 PM
That is special Subimal. Congratulations for your win :)
Gentry Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your win with this palindrome. Well done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Susan.
May Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 9:03 AM
The sagas of love never end...Congrats on your win Subimal..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 12:28 PM
This is a lovely love-themed poem that absolutely seems to fit the contest criteria. I'm impressed and enjoyed the read very much. All the best ... CayCay
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:56 AM
Thank you, CayCay for your encouraging words.
Sands Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:14 PM
This is perfectly done for the contest, Subimal. Very well written! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Hamilton Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Love this Subimal, great title drew me right in, and perfect execution was a rewarding read!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Thank you, John for your encouragement.
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