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Writing poetry inner turmoil unscrambled by words on a page.

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Date: 7/15/2014 8:28:00 AM
Dear Joe: Very nice fragment. Leon
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:26:00 PM
It is so often just that way...I love this..think it may be a senryu though. BG
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Joe Murphy
Date: 7/15/2014 7:39:00 AM
Thank you. You are right, it is more senryu than haiku.