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Writing In the Rain

Sitting on a branch of a white sapote tree Shivering, crying and alone Away from home, on the highest branch that can hold me Hiding......no more beatings mommy Scared, it's pitch black and sounds of insects rule the night Hiding......I've become the teen that runs away With any chance, searching for that ray Scared, I don't want to die, I want to see more days I want to be heard, can anyone hear me The rain falls hard, hitting hard my bare back with every drop, my scars become more scarce The rain I love, it cleanses my tears The rain is my friend, atleast am not so alone The drench and the cold night are better than the place i call home Sounds of the rain soothe my lonely heart Sounds in the dark protect me from the pain Sounds of my cries assure me that am okay The songs I write in the rain, are my tickets to be away Sponsor Pendleton Arkwright Contest Name Rain and Dark, Isolated Places

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Date: 8/22/2015 12:31:00 PM
Njeri, I score this a seven, if this is your truth, the Great Spirit, favored you, to keep you safe from harm. In our darkest hour, we are never alone, the Most High, is with us always, even unto the end of the world. Keep your head to the sky, always Ken
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 2:00:00 PM
yes He did. thank you Ken
Date: 8/22/2015 7:50:00 AM
A very powerful and emotive piece. I feel moved by your words.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 2:02:00 PM
thank you Richard
Date: 8/22/2015 4:17:00 AM
Incredibly dark and sad - the imagery is so intense Njeri good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 2:01:00 PM
am glad the contest inspired me to write this. thank you Jan
Date: 8/22/2015 3:24:00 AM
So very sad. This poem is full of pain but also filled with hope and determination. Wonderfully written. Warm rgds, Laura
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Laura

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