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Writing in sand and stone

Writing "I love you" in the sand suggests that love is meant to fade;
That it can be washed away by life's periodic tides.
I suggest we write our love in stone, always carving it deeper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2015 9:16:00 AM
Another thought of love - love it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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daver austin
Date: 5/9/2015 8:36:00 AM
Why not read some of my stuff too. daver
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/7/2015 5:54:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. I have some pretty romantic stuff on my list; take a look. I suggest The Seasons Of Our Love, I Can Only Touch The Empty Air, Somewhere In Time, Ballroom Delights, Moonlight Serenade, Love's Magic, Scar On My Heart, Something You Left Behind, Odessey, Lady Luck Stomped Out, Far Destined Winds, .....
Date: 5/4/2015 7:16:00 AM
Very nice, we should carve our love deep in stone so that it may last forever ;)
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/7/2015 5:46:00 PM
Exactly. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/3/2015 8:37:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:16:00 AM
Thanks for commenting. It was nice to see it was featured, 10 months later.
Date: 5/3/2015 7:41:00 PM
Mark, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:13:00 AM
Thanks again. You liked it last July too. I was glad to hear it would be featured.
Date: 7/3/2014 10:34:00 PM
I'm surprised not to see this one higher up on the list. I quite enjoyed it, Congrats. Good to revisit this one.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:12:00 AM
A belated thanks. Glad you liked it--I thought it would do better too back then. Nice to see that it was featured 10 months later.
Date: 7/3/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.
Date: 7/3/2014 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful win Mark...Linda
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.
Date: 7/3/2014 6:23:00 AM
A great message and inspiration on love, Mark, congrats on the win
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.
Date: 7/3/2014 4:00:00 AM
Lovely little sijio with simply a brilliant message.. Congrats on the write and HM Dutch greetings
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later. What did the "HM" mean?
Date: 7/2/2014 4:11:00 PM
Hi Mark, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! Beautiful write! Kindest regards.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:09:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.
Date: 6/5/2014 1:46:00 PM
Terrific feelings resonate through few words. Nice one Mark, James :)
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.
Date: 6/4/2014 7:48:00 AM
Very enlightening
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.
Date: 6/3/2014 1:32:00 PM
Mark I agree, great write...David
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.
Date: 6/3/2014 1:54:00 AM
Enjoyed the thoughts full of feelings, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/3/2014 9:40:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. Numerous things have been written about writing romantic things in the sand, to see them washed away. I thought an opposite approach would be interesting.
Date: 6/2/2014 9:03:00 PM
I really love this one. Sorry I had put a comment here moments ago and accidentally deleted it. This is deep and cleverly written.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/4/2015 2:07:00 AM
A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured a year later.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/3/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thanks. I was striving for deep on that one.
Date: 6/2/2014 10:01:00 AM
Love it Mark very clever write. Hugs Jan xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/2/2014 1:44:00 PM
It seemed like the logical thing to say for the image. Thanks for the comment.