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Writing In Sand and Stone

Writing "I love you" in the sand suggests that love is meant to fade;
That it can be washed away by life's periodic tides.
I suggest we write our love in stone, always carving it deeper.

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Daver Austin Date: 5/7/2015 9:16:00 AM Another thought of love - love it. Congrats on the selection. daver Login to Reply Daver Austin Date: 5/9/2015 8:36:00 AM Why not read some of my stuff too. daver Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/7/2015 5:54:00 PM Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. I have some pretty romantic stuff on my list; take a look. I suggest The Seasons Of Our Love, I Can Only Touch The Empty Air, Somewhere In Time, Ballroom Delights, Moonlight Serenade, Love's Magic, Scar On My Heart, Something You Left Behind, Odessey, Lady Luck Stomped Out, Far Destined Winds, .....

Casarah Nance Date: 5/4/2015 7:16:00 AM Very nice, we should carve our love deep in stone so that it may last forever ;) Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/7/2015 5:46:00 PM Exactly. Thanks for commenting.

Skat A Date: 5/3/2015 8:37:00 PM Mark, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:16:00 AM Thanks for commenting. It was nice to see it was featured, 10 months later.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/3/2015 7:41:00 PM Mark, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:13:00 AM Thanks again. You liked it last July too. I was glad to hear it would be featured.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2014 10:34:00 PM I'm surprised not to see this one higher up on the list. I quite enjoyed it, Congrats. Good to revisit this one. Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:12:00 AM A belated thanks. Glad you liked it--I thought it would do better too back then. Nice to see that it was featured 10 months later.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/3/2014 9:55:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/3/2014 11:41:00 AM Wonderful win Mark...Linda Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/3/2014 6:23:00 AM A great message and inspiration on love, Mark, congrats on the win Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:10:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/2/2014 4:11:00 PM Hi Mark, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! Beautiful write! Kindest regards. Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:09:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 10 months later.

James Fraser Date: 6/5/2014 1:46:00 PM Terrific feelings resonate through few words. Nice one Mark, James :) Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.

Grace Mutindi Date: 6/4/2014 7:48:00 AM Very enlightening Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.

David Williams Date: 6/3/2014 1:32:00 PM Mark I agree, great write...David Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:08:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured 11 months later.

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/3/2014 1:54:00 AM Enjoyed the thoughts full of feelings, Mark Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 6/3/2014 9:40:00 AM Thanks Dr. Mehta. Numerous things have been written about writing romantic things in the sand, to see them washed away. I thought an opposite approach would be interesting.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/2/2014 9:03:00 PM I really love this one. Sorry I had put a comment here moments ago and accidentally deleted it. This is deep and cleverly written. Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 5/4/2015 2:07:00 AM A belated thanks. Nice to see it was featured a year later. Mark J. Halliday Date: 6/3/2014 9:37:00 AM Thanks. I was striving for deep on that one.

Jan Allison Date: 6/2/2014 10:01:00 AM Love it Mark very clever write. Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mark J. Halliday Date: 6/2/2014 1:44:00 PM It seemed like the logical thing to say for the image. Thanks for the comment.