Writing
I read your words they are so naked with truth
Fluttering through my head, then souring like birds
I feel as though I’m drinking from the fountain of youth
Clearly I can see without my vision blurred
She came into my world on a whim
She was cautious and tattered but none the less
In time her mind became open and filled to the brim
Words spewed out with grace in excess
She wrote of needs and desires, wants and expectations
How she can pour this emotion out on paper
I should successfully inscribe such a creation
Her notions floated around me like a mysterious vapor
This is not a competition, yet she wanted more
How can I give what I do not know?
If only I could change, if only I could morph
Maybe I can reach through the layers and just let go
There has to be something there to share
Dig deep, break down your shield
Oh, hell I do not have even a prayer
All inside is sewn and sealed
A significant perception came to me
I began to write and build on this single detail
Suddenly there it was, a half page, just what I wanted to see
I did it; I let her see a portion; I was unveiled
Copyright © Deedra Ramlow | Year Posted 2010
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