Write a Pantoum Quilt

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Write me a pantoum carefully, poet Constructed of a flowering design As a quilt, colorful patches sew it This pantoum other creations outshine Constructed of a flowering design French Bouquet that fancy garden array Let this pantoum all other creations outshine Capture Modernistic Flower bouquet French Bouquet that fancy garden array Written in rhyme a design sublime Capture Modernistic Flower Bouquet Colors bold against black midnight nighttime Written in rhyme a design sublime Floral Album speaks of multitude appeal Colors bold against black midnight nighttime Modernistic Flower antique quilt surreal Floral Album speaks of multitude appeal As a quilt, colorful patches sew it Modernistic Flower antique quilt surreal Write me a pantoum carefully, poet This is about writing and about antique quilts..Comparison of writing to making a quilt..

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/4/2017 3:21:00 PM

ohh, a delicate drapery of woven lines, sara... the images that spring to mind are something to be truly savoured... cody must like this the way i do... huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2017 3:31:00 PM

Nette, Thanks for the visit to my page..Quilts are lovely and the person who does those that are so fancy are truly gifted ladies or gentlemen..I suppose that some men have done them as well..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 5:41:00 AM

My grandmother used to quilt, they weren't too complicated though some were more than others! I have about five or six of them for my bed! I asked her to do one for all seasons, plus one for Christmas, and one, of course, for Halloween! I picked out the fabric for the Halloween quilt! She went along with it, even though she did not like that holiday! I thought you delightful poem was truly nostalgic! I was enthralled by it's powerful impressions this morning! So superior, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2017 8:51:00 AM

Russell, Your grandmother was a special lady to do all of that for you..I have only done one quilt and it was a sailboat design for our grandson, Cody..Karter is using it now..I used fannel fabric because I thought that would be warm for Phyllis said that he would get cold in the car/truck when they went somewhere..I found out flannel was not a good fabric to use for quilting..Sara..I think quilts are lovely though..

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2017 10:44:00 PM

I really enjoyed this, I have always wanted a Quilt, has this has always me reminded me of my grandmothers country place, and brings me such memories!!! Beautiful poem!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2017 7:32:00 AM

Arthur, It is amazing how one item can bring back delightful times at our grandparents or parents home..Sometimes a scent can remind me of my mother who I still miss after all these years..Your presence at my work is appreciated..Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 7:06:00 PM

A beautiful pantoum Sara. Lovely rhythm and rhyme within your wonderful lines, especially; "French Bouquet that fancy garden array' - beautiful! Good luck in the contest! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2017 7:29:00 AM

Susan, Your comments are encouraging..Thanks for the well wishes..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2017 6:50:00 PM

Good blend of writing and quilts..best for a win Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2017 7:28:00 AM

Vijay, There are names of antique quilts in the poem if you wanted to look them up and see what they look like..Thanks for dropping by..Sara