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Wrinkles On My Wrinkles

Soon will turn eighty, that's over the hill
But the Highland Fling, I'm able to do still
As my kilt flips up
One can see I'm no pup
With wrinkles on my wrinkles I'm heading downhill


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Funom Makama

April 20, 2015 at 8:58 AM

Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.

Jack Ellison

April 20, 2015 at 9:00 AM

In the dictionary beside the word "kind" is a picture of you my good friend!!! WOW!

Laura Breidenthal

April 19, 2015 at 4:11 PM

Definitely did not expect the kilt flip, Jack. Then again, I should expect the unexpected from you! Awesome limerick!!! :) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 4:23 PM

Phew!!!!!

Laura Breidenthal

April 19, 2015 at 4:22 PM

No worries Jack! I find you pieces hilarious! ~Laura

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 4:21 PM

I apologize for my naughtiness, sweet lady! Don't want to do anything that would in any way, discourage you from visiting! From now on I will keep that in mine my dear one!!! Lots of love, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

April 19, 2015 at 2:58 PM

Hope the winds are warm or there'll be shrivels along with those wrinkles

Laura Breidenthal

April 19, 2015 at 4:10 PM

XD!!

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 3:15 PM

Can't imagine what you could possibly mean, Mr. Tim?????

Carol Eastman

April 19, 2015 at 1:18 PM

Now LimmerJack you're not heading down hill... And old age hasn't made you mentally ill... You live up North so there's a natural chill... But the wrinkles didn't come from being old and shrill... The lines are from all that laughter you instill... My friend they're laughter lines from so much good will....

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 3:14 PM

Ya! That's it... they're laugh lines!!! LOL See, when I laugh, how the wrinkles get more obvious! Told ya! xxx