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We left Buffalo not Hungary. Sorry for any confusion.

Like bookends, Grandma and Grandpa — those smiles — only one wears the apron and the music, classical and gypsy I was glowing in their eyes, growing only for one who kept her pride of me, when for the longest time, inferiority. Blessing of a Hungarian household we left just in time for the drama to build there was rifts, crashes and death and in one Poughkeepsie starter home no Christmas tree to be found in 1962 Did we feel the sudden sadness — my dad’s heart imploding — his dad’s book closed, forever...forever stretches out reality is a sudden blowout only now in his wrinkled years can he leak information from his tears 1/17/2021

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Date: 1/19/2021 2:00:00 AM
Wow, sad, penned with great feeling.
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Date: 1/18/2021 12:21:00 PM
- Feelings that should never be talked about ... like my father ... but a lot was told through tears the last years of his life - A excellent poem, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2021 5:37:00 AM
WOW. Powerful. Well done. God bless you
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Date: 1/17/2021 9:17:00 AM
Kim, Lovely and tragic music in your poem. Whether their eyes glowed in Buffalo's snow or Poughkeepsie without a tree, you've honored them well. Budapest always waits. -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thank you! I sure would love to see Budapest! :)
Date: 1/17/2021 8:05:00 AM
They were turbulent times. Thank God a war was averted. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2021 9:04:00 AM
Thanks for the comment.
Date: 1/17/2021 5:17:00 AM
It seems that in 1962 Cuba and Russia had issues about missiles there was unrest and clashes and rifts and Hungary fell under USSR so it seems your family left just in time - it took time for your grandpa, right into his wrinkled years to talk, between his tears. Great, great write my friend. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2021 9:03:00 AM
Grandma and Grandpa were here in the early 1900’s. Grandpa died in a car accident.All’s my dad would say is he was a nice man.

Book: Shattered Sighs