Wrinkles

Wrinkle, wrinkle on my face…

Couldn't you have found some other place ?

What made you furrow between my eyes ?

And all those creams, they are nothing but lies….

When I look in the mirror, all I can see…

Is a silver haired person staring back at me….

Then there are the lines , which run down the sides of my nose…

Running in circles, round my lips, down my neck and into my clothes….

Speaking of clothes , isn’t that where the wrinkles should be ?

Is nature playing a trick on me ?

Or is this a sign “ old “ is sneaking up on me ?

It seems only yesterday I was a young girl .. and had my whole life ahead of me…

So simple..so free……

Which don’t take me wrong I have enjoyed my life’s ride…

And there isn’t much in my life, I haven’t tried….

But it should would be nice if I could just see…

Myself with one less wrinkle…when I looked back at me…..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Koven Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 11:00 AM
Try Photoshop. It can erase wrinkles. Another clever poem. Congratulations. Allan
Force Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 2:15 PM
sorry Allan...NOTE..I spelled your name correctly this time...Photoshop ? that is only a temporary solution to a permanent problem...hmmm perhaps another poem ? thanks for the compliment...
Hendricks Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 3:40 AM
You are a hoot, KJ!! I had me a good laugh on this one. Licia :-)
Force Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 4:10 AM
delysia...Thank you for the visit and glad you got a chuckle..I know I do when I look in the mirror, beats crying...
Peterson Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Heartfelt words, appreciated and understood. Only wisdom ransoms time, or would you really rather be back in the dating scene? Thanks, Mark
Force Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Mark..Back in the dating scene...Bite your tongue ! but thanks for commenting...appreciated..
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:01 AM
- Nice to read your poem kj. - Age drawings come with age, wrinkles are wisdom. - Unnatural with a wrinkle-free face on people who are "old". -Smile at your reflection. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Force Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 8:17 AM
If wrinkles are a sign of wisdom..I must be the wisest in the land ! ...trust me when I look in the mirror I smile a lot..hahaha..thanks for stopping by..
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