Wright Again!

Wright Again!

Jeremiah feels the heat forthrightly
His donations lower more than slightly
While the plate is passing
Seems surely it’s fasting
As it stops and dangles politely

© Mar 23 2010      Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 5, 2010 at 10:34 AM
An uneasy feeling for the "Have Not" desirous of giving.
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March 24, 2010 at 4:19 AM
10% Smiles
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March 23, 2010 at 11:36 PM
Nice, it puts me right there in the pew
Murphy Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 9:04 AM
very nice limerick loved it faleshia
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March 23, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Bittersweet humor, Charles. Awesome limerick. And thanks for your kind words. Love, Carolyn
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