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I am digging in my sandpit and I find a wriggly worm I take it to show my mummy you should have seen her squirm! She does not like creepy crawlies as they make her feel quite ill But she's not seen my new pet spider I have called my spider Bill! Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 10/12/21

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Date: 10/22/2021 9:51:00 AM
nice take on the contest Jan...Delice
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Date: 10/16/2021 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. I am with mom, no worms or spiders. Have a blessed autumn day............
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Date: 10/15/2021 2:40:00 PM
- Love this one :) - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2021 11:58:00 AM
Congrats on your cringeworthy win, Jan. Terry
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Date: 10/14/2021 11:07:00 PM
Boys will be boys and they all like the creepy crawlies, girls on the other hand, including mummy, sometime freak at what boys bring home. Congratulations Jan on a fine win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/14/2021 6:56:00 PM
Great write, Jan , many congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:32:00 AM
He should have named it Will as his mother would naturally be more receptive to a wriggly Willie!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/13/2021 4:50:00 PM
hahaha you are so funny Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/13/2021 9:08:00 AM
Let’s hope it’s not a banana spider! Loved it!
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Date: 10/13/2021 4:50:00 PM
oh definitely!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/13/2021 4:20:00 AM
Awww, that's so cute Jan. It reminds me of being a child. Rubber worms out of gumboil machines were popular and I would scare my mom quite frequently! Good Luck!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/13/2021 4:49:00 PM
lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/12/2021 4:35:00 PM
very cute, jan!! I like how it's pared down. Mine should have been a wee bit shorter with its lines!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/13/2021 4:49:00 PM
Its difficult to know how long the lines should be, i was worried this was too short lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/12/2021 4:18:00 PM
All you need now is a slug and you’ve cornered the market in ‘Eek’. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Terry
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/13/2021 4:48:00 PM
lol thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/12/2021 1:51:00 PM
Quite funny nursery rhyme. Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/12/2021 1:48:00 PM
this is adorable, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/12/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Ilene i was thinking of grandkids when i wrote it lol:-) hugs jan xx