Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Wriggly Worm Nursery Rhyme

I am digging in my sandpit
and I find a wriggly worm
I take it to show my mummy
you should have seen her squirm!

She does not like creepy crawlies
as they make her feel quite ill
But she's not seen my new pet spider
I have called my spider Bill!

Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Eve Roper

10/12/21

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Delice Arleen Skelly October 22, 2021 at 9:51 AM nice take on the contest Jan...Delice

Paula Goldsmith October 16, 2021 at 12:03 PM Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. I am with mom, no worms or spiders. Have a blessed autumn day............

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2021 at 2:40 PM - Love this one :) - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Terry Flood October 15, 2021 at 11:58 AM Congrats on your cringeworthy win, Jan. Terry

Jennifer Proxenos October 14, 2021 at 11:07 PM Boys will be boys and they all like the creepy crawlies, girls on the other hand, including mummy, sometime freak at what boys bring home. Congratulations Jan on a fine win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Eve Roper October 14, 2021 at 6:56 PM Great write, Jan , many congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Rico Leffanta October 13, 2021 at 11:32 AM He should have named it Will as his mother would naturally be more receptive to a wriggly Willie! Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 4:50 PM hahaha you are so funny Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues October 13, 2021 at 9:08 AM Let’s hope it’s not a banana spider! Loved it! Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 4:50 PM oh definitely!:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile October 13, 2021 at 4:20 AM Awww, that's so cute Jan. It reminds me of being a child. Rubber worms out of gumboil machines were popular and I would scare my mom quite frequently! Good Luck!! Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 4:49 PM lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2021 at 4:35 PM very cute, jan!! I like how it's pared down. Mine should have been a wee bit shorter with its lines!! Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 4:49 PM Its difficult to know how long the lines should be, i was worried this was too short lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood October 12, 2021 at 4:18 PM All you need now is a slug and you’ve cornered the market in ‘Eek’. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Terry Jan Allison October 13, 2021 at 4:48 PM lol thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar October 12, 2021 at 1:51 PM Quite funny nursery rhyme. Hugs Jan Allison October 12, 2021 at 2:20 PM thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer October 12, 2021 at 1:48 PM this is adorable, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison October 12, 2021 at 1:50 PM Thanks Ilene i was thinking of grandkids when i wrote it lol:-) hugs jan xx