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Wriggly Worm Nursery Rhyme

I am digging in my sandpit
and I find a wriggly worm
I take it to show my mummy
you should have seen her squirm!

She does not like creepy crawlies
as they make her feel quite ill
But she's not seen my new pet spider
I have called my spider Bill!

Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Eve Roper

10/12/21

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Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 10/22/2021 9:51:00 AM nice take on the contest Jan...Delice Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/16/2021 12:03:00 PM Congratulations on your win. What a fun write. I am with mom, no worms or spiders. Have a blessed autumn day............ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/15/2021 2:40:00 PM - Love this one :) - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Terry Flood Date: 10/15/2021 11:58:00 AM Congrats on your cringeworthy win, Jan. Terry Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/14/2021 11:07:00 PM Boys will be boys and they all like the creepy crawlies, girls on the other hand, including mummy, sometime freak at what boys bring home. Congratulations Jan on a fine win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/14/2021 6:56:00 PM Great write, Jan , many congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/13/2021 11:32:00 AM He should have named it Will as his mother would naturally be more receptive to a wriggly Willie! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/13/2021 4:50:00 PM hahaha you are so funny Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/13/2021 9:08:00 AM Let’s hope it’s not a banana spider! Loved it! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/13/2021 4:50:00 PM oh definitely!:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile Date: 10/13/2021 4:20:00 AM Awww, that's so cute Jan. It reminds me of being a child. Rubber worms out of gumboil machines were popular and I would scare my mom quite frequently! Good Luck!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/13/2021 4:49:00 PM lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2021 4:35:00 PM very cute, jan!! I like how it's pared down. Mine should have been a wee bit shorter with its lines!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/13/2021 4:49:00 PM Its difficult to know how long the lines should be, i was worried this was too short lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood Date: 10/12/2021 4:18:00 PM All you need now is a slug and you’ve cornered the market in ‘Eek’. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Terry Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/13/2021 4:48:00 PM lol thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/12/2021 1:51:00 PM Quite funny nursery rhyme. Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2021 2:20:00 PM thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/12/2021 1:48:00 PM this is adorable, jan! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2021 1:50:00 PM Thanks Ilene i was thinking of grandkids when i wrote it lol:-) hugs jan xx