Wretched

Rivulets of raindrops cut tributary streams
On the panes of the windows, running freely they cling
Stone faced and staring, motor skills corrode
Just snippets of memories in unbreakable code

Rumbles of thunder, sudden flashes of light
Draw no response to a once vibrant life
Surrounded by loved ones, faces without names
Words with no meanings are spoken in vain

Lost to a world of childlike innocence
Hopeless and alone with no pretense
All doors are closed, no forward or back
Now a question of time for this wretched attack

No need to hide tears for family and friends
Who suffer in sadness as cognizance ends
Such incomparable devastation and emotional drain
To watch someone you love, live so restrained


     2015 statistics show 44 million worldwide suffer from Alzheimer's
      1 in 9 Americans over 65- costing over 226 billion in the US alone
   The 6th leading cause of death     No cure!!
    an original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/14/2016 11:26:00 AM
A very moving poem on a heartbreaking condition - I have written on this subject too: I do hope one day they find a cure:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2016 11:42:00 AM
Sadly 'lost' is a very apt way to describe the way this condition and you 'lose' the person a long time before they pass away - simply heartbreaking Daniel:-( hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thank you,Jan. I have lost several close relatives from this disease and just thought I'd try to keep the fire burning. It's the least I can do. I really appreciate your kind comments of support and your valuable time. Peace and Happy Valentine's Day.
Date: 2/14/2016 10:00:00 AM
my grandaunt suffered from this ailment and passed on, remembering nothing much about her life's moments... a stirring write from you, daniel!.. have a happy hearts day.. huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, and you have my condolences. I too have lost several close kin from this horrific devastating disease. The financial and emotional expense simply destroys all affected. Let's pray they find a cure in our lifetime. On this day of hearts may yours be happy and light. Peace, my friend.
Date: 2/14/2016 9:56:00 AM
It is a terrible illness for everyone concerned. Your write does justice to sympathize.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/14/2016 11:06:00 AM
I have lost many kin to this horrific disease. This was my way of reconciling my feelings. Thank you for your support and kindness.
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