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Wrestling With Uncertainty

A face in a crowd grows numb on the subway
which hides evening’s woe, then closes a day,
mirroring grief across late Autumn’s  sky
to wrestle with angst she cannot deny
like one thorn circling down from a fogged  lair
while hours pound  this final ache quite unfair.

Her dream turns bleak through uncertainty’s flow,
it knows not which compass  of life to go…
frightened to death , brushing sleets of mad rain
when a long gone illness comes back again;
like time’s flick winging a dark raven’s plume
as sallow hands collect flowers abloom.

But oh this wish to live stirs ever on,
for when litanies of prayer are done
each whisper tumbles  as moonbeams abide…
while nights claim her dream, “ fate is in your side.”



5/4/2016
Silent One’s Contest: Lyrics  Cliché  Image
Inspiration from the lyrics ‘ Mad World’
Cliché ,’ Frightened To Death’ … Image # 5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hlabisa Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Work of art....congrats Nette
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 10:56 AM
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S !! on your wonderful win in the contest
Misra Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 10:30 AM
Congrats on a terrific poem and placement, Nette. ~kc~
Devnath  Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Wishing you good luck. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 4:06 PM
WEll done, Nette. I think you will have scored a home run with this one! Love how you were inspired by Mad World. That song is SO awesome.
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Reads like a winner to me.. Great contest entry..Good to know fate is on her side in light of a horrible illness..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Excellent. Very moving write. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing it
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 1:06 AM
A truly moving piece! Good luck in the contest Nette!
Ashe Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 2:57 PM
The pic itself speaks volumes and with your write it shouts out a dark truth! Line #8 grabs me! The best to you in this contest!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 1:21 PM
- This is a dark side of an mad world - Great written for this contest, Nette - Good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 1:12 PM
There is a conflict between how beautifully written this is, and how devastating the implications of the message are. I will forever be awed by the strength that some people possess, and their sheer grit to overcome. Good luck in the contest. It get's a 7 from me. -G
Harvey Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Well written. I really like the way you used the words.
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