Notes About The Poem

Wreckage

BOAT
                                           wreckage
                                           debris left

                                         volcano erupts
                                      veiling dim horizon
                                   ocean turns melancholic

                           "ruins - bleak witness of crushed life"



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                                         June 11, 2022
                                  Pyramids Poetry Contest
                                    Sponsor: Joseph May
                             Syllables checked by HMS.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Love your take of the contest, Malabika . Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. God bless my friend
May Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Very nicely penned Malabika, Conggrats on your win
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Thanks, Joseph. I feel honoured.
Seeker Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Ah! That’s quite observant and imaginative! Volcano erupts … congrats on your win, Mala
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet, for your lovely comment. I have to read yours soon, and get inspired! Best ~ Mala
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