Wreckage

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BOAT wreckage debris left volcano erupts veiling dim horizon ocean turns melancholic "ruins - bleak witness of crushed life" PICTURE 1 June 11, 2022 Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Syllables checked by HMS.com

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2022 8:18:00 PM

Love your take of the contest, Malabika . Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. God bless my friend

Joseph May

Date: 6/18/2022 9:19:00 AM

Very nicely penned Malabika, Conggrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/19/2022 6:28:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. I feel honoured.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/18/2022 8:17:00 AM

Ah! That’s quite observant and imaginative! Volcano erupts … congrats on your win, Mala

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Poet, for your lovely comment. I have to read yours soon, and get inspired! Best ~ Mala