Wreathing Sonnet

Past portraits of ancestral knowing
keep our knowing alive through folk lore,
traditional lore is still showing,
habits showing convention before.
Observance comes before each pathway,
bygone pathway shows how we live now,
what manifests now is our new day,
where each day displays what fates allow.
Customs allow us our connection,
our connection to past is esteemed,
ancestors esteemed by protection,
the protection of what we have dreamed.
We achieve what we dreamed at long last
made to last through the rites of our past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Fischer Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Well thank you all so much! I do not know how the contest things work here, but am pleased you all like my words!
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations Krow on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Wonderful sonnet that is really tied so well together with each line-- super congrats on your win, Krow :) -- nikko :)
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:24 AM
congrats on your win in the contest Krow, this is so good. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Krow
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Krow, you won in John Freeman's Sonnet Contest. Big congratulations. I don't know if I've seen your work before, but I sure am glad I had to read this one. We are all connected to the past. If we are lucky, we learn from history. This poem goes to my favorites. Best wishes, Carolyn
Fischer Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Um, what win? I know nothing......
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Congrats Krow on your big win in Moses contest with this excellent entry luv..enjoy a super win tonight with a sweet victory luv..
Freeman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Great job you have done Krow with this worthy near th top presentation, worthy of it's honor. Agape, Moses
Effendi Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 2:38 PM
This is really classic write! I loved it... All the best with your future endeavors Krow
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