Debbie Guzzi Poet Rhyme

Wreathed

Greenery of life
life in all its   varied  * forms
form the circle       and * adorn
adorn the door        of winter’s night
night of silence         starry bright
bright with red      ribbons all aglow
balls of gold  and  berries  so
so the wreath pines for life.
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Nette Onclaud January 6, 2011 at 1:03 AM incredile write and design... much enjoyed, deborah! CONGRATS!! :) nette

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2011 at 4:35 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2011 at 9:40 AM Congratulations on your win Deborah in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin January 5, 2011 at 8:05 AM Hi Deborah. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Beautiful words crafted into a special write. Eamon

Daniel Cwiak January 5, 2011 at 5:58 AM Beautifully written and scripted, Deb. I love the way you tied the bow! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Dr Hitendra Mehta January 4, 2011 at 9:46 PM Deborah -Big Wow..... for presenation too. Very creative.Many Congrats for clinching third spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta

Sidney Beck January 4, 2011 at 8:03 AM very clever rhymes and I like d the decoration too...well done Deb...Syd

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2011 at 9:34 PM Gosh, I just love how you made this a shape poem. It's really pretty, Deb. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan January 3, 2011 at 8:37 PM Amazing. Congratulations once again.

Carrie Richards January 3, 2011 at 6:35 PM How did I miss this gem???? Loverly!!! :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 3, 2011 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman January 3, 2011 at 4:34 PM A beautiful wreath you have structured here, Debbie. Congratulations on your place with this beautiful presentation! Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick January 3, 2011 at 3:59 PM Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. this is very clever. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 3, 2011 at 3:54 PM Congrats Debbie on your 3rd place win in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry.. enjoy your top spot success tonight with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta January 3, 2011 at 3:30 PM Congratulations on the third place in my contest with the nice layout, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 7, 2010 at 6:45 PM Very nice design and presentation.. a cute little fluffy tree with a powerful message for the wreath symbol.. good luck my TEACH... so nice to see u here again... was very lonely without u Souping and Blogging..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta December 7, 2010 at 3:31 PM Thanks, deb, for your entry into my contest.

Carolyn Devonshire December 7, 2010 at 3:16 PM Nicely done, Deborah! Best wishes in the Wreath contest. You created a vivid image of the wreath and worked well in this difficult form. Love, Carolyn