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I lie on a mound of earth Ebb of agony swells my consciousness In the mist of farce figures fade out Innocence of paper boats drowns in the floods of tears A rainbow ascends mourning the lost kiss of little feet on its hunch Butterflies flutter in to the crevices of oblivion ignoring the touch of little fingers Forlorn and forsaken I lie on a mound of earth Rain seeks pores on my body

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/15/2014 2:52:00 PM
Very nice write Syam. Thank you for your comment. Take care!
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:35:00 PM
Thi is deep, sad and very heartfelt. Thanks for visiting my page and thanks for sharing this with us... Lucilla
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:56:00 AM
You tell a sad tale very well in this poem! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
Now, This poem is a well written and emotional poem. Very good Syam.....Roger
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Date: 1/10/2014 7:49:00 AM
Agonizing poetry that penetrates the heart leaving behind scars of unhappiness! Wonderfully done, Syam! Welcome!
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:45:00 AM
I can feel the pain..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2014 7:50:00 PM
This is sad sad and dark, thank you for your comment on my single red rose poem i love nature my friend. cheri
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Date: 1/4/2014 1:15:00 PM
Syam, refreshing ending. epic as it fades away. wow...just love the poem. ..Linda
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:47:00 AM
- A touching and well written poem, Syam - Thanks for reading my last poem, enjoyable ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Syam Madappattu
Date: 1/4/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Anne ....

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