Wrapped Rapt

Wrapped Rapt Cellophane rainbows Spectrum dreams Silken tied Brooding stormy skies Sunset patterns And quiet moments Kisses in sunlight Laughing rain Cold cuddling warm nights Bottles of deep red wine Candles melted by time And embers of requited passion Sweet seconds captured Fingers entwined And sparkling eyes Lazy stretching Quite mornings All my dreamings If I could

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2009 12:57:00 PM

Colin, a moving tribute to love's passion! It's what we all seek, and sometimes we're lucky enough to find it. Love the thought-provoking conclusion: "If I could." And thanks for your comments on "Wrappings Give Way." I think we all appreciate input. Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/12/2009 11:40:00 AM

Colin this is a very beautiful and Romantic poem - You did a wonderful job on this it reads very well flows very well and and is very profound in its message - Some things in life we must take time for or whats it all worth - great poem Colin - God Bless, MJ

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/12/2009 11:07:00 AM

And all the ladies said Sssssighhhhh. I can hear it one big unison sigh. You poets got it going on. Great job lovey. Laurie