Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

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Wrapped In White

I long to tread upon the snow

in hush of winter, wrapped in white;

in feathered mounds serenely go.

I long to tread upon the snow.

The boughs hang low;  no wind doth blow.

My love, come see the wondrous sight!

I long to tread upon the snow

In hush of winter, wrapped in white


Nov. 14, 2015 By Andrea Dietrich
For the "Write Me A Winter Poem" Contest of Broken Wings

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis November 21, 2015 at 3:40 PM Delightfully penned, taking me through crisp air, and softness so soft, I float.

Casarah Nance November 20, 2015 at 3:42 PM Such ease of your repetition, very well done, grats on another winner!

Kayod5 Kayode November 20, 2015 at 2:52 AM Congrats on your win Andrea...hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 20, 2015 at 12:42 AM Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write dear Andrea!

Skat A November 19, 2015 at 8:18 PM Andrea, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**

Anisha Dutta November 19, 2015 at 6:11 PM Congratulation Andrea for win. Lovely nice poem. i always like poems rhyming. Hugs Anisha Dsak

Michael Tor November 19, 2015 at 6:07 PM Congratulations on your win Andrea!!

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 1:40 PM No one writes better and more beautiful triolets Andrea!!! congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Nathan D. November 19, 2015 at 10:21 AM this perfect imagery and I love the unbroken flow. good luck in the contest

Daver Austin November 17, 2015 at 2:21 PM Beautiful, dear Andrea, but I'll stay inside with a cup of hot coffee. Love, Dave

Kp Nunez November 17, 2015 at 5:37 AM The repetition aptly underscores the longing for expressed right at the start. I can only agree that triolet is the best form for your write as displayed here, Andie. all the best!

Lindsay Laurie November 16, 2015 at 6:41 PM Nicely presented as usual Andrea. We don't get snow in winter down here - Lindsay

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 16, 2015 at 7:25 AM Andie, love your triolet, graceful as ever!!! ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 15, 2015 at 9:23 PM * Triolet...I just LOVE autocorrect.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 15, 2015 at 9:22 PM Beautiful, Andrea! To me, you are the Triplet Queen. Whenever I read one of yours, I feel inspired to write one. I wanted to thank you for remembering me while I was away...missed you and I'm happy to be back. Hugs, Rhonda

Tim Smith November 15, 2015 at 5:24 PM It is a beautiful sight and I love being out in it when the winds are minimal.... Re my poem your analysis was spot on.

Charmaine Chircop November 15, 2015 at 1:44 PM Such a wonderful poem. How I miss the Winter-snow on my isle..I so love this beauty. Re yr question on my comment.I am doing fine dear.Eileen is coming to Malta in March.I'm so excted.If you could come too one day .

Phyllis Babcock November 15, 2015 at 12:01 PM Beautiful write for the contest Andrea.Nicely done but can say I am awfully glad we have no white stuff as yet. Enjoying a long fall. love phyl

CayCay Godwin November 15, 2015 at 11:59 AM Very pretty - makes me long to tread with you ... CayCay

Gary Bateman November 15, 2015 at 7:46 AM Hello Andrea!! This is a perfect write. I believe you will have a very strong entry, if not the "Winning Poem" here in Broken Wings' contest. Best of Luck to you in the contest!! I've not yet done a Triolet style poem, but certainly plan to do so. (I studied the format for the Triolet, and your write here is a perfect example of one for sure. Outstanding!! A "7" + "FAV"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Matthew Anish November 14, 2015 at 10:22 PM The snows will be here soon enough. I went to a poetry reading today and read a few things. I hope you do well in the contest and I a sure you will with this fine work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Beautiful Scars November 14, 2015 at 9:58 PM Beautiful and good luck in the contest! *smiles* -LU

Connie Marcum Wong November 14, 2015 at 8:57 PM I think there will be a lot of winter poems this year Andrea. Winter has already begun in so many areas. This is a beauty!

Lin Lane November 14, 2015 at 8:01 PM You brought me right in to this scene...so well that I almost needed a coat. lol Love the title.

Nette Onclaud November 14, 2015 at 7:53 PM a mellow rhapsody depicting the lustrous side of winter, andie.. ohh so fine!..huggs

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