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in the hedge outside the window a sparrow was eating a bug... suddenly a hawk hit the hedge... seized the sparrow and flew off. len

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Date: 4/21/2025 10:36:00 PM
Karma does bite back! I wonder if anything ate the hawk, haha :) have a great day, dear poet xxx
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Date: 4/22/2025 7:46:00 PM
i love bird watching....ongoing evolution in action; camera goes with it.....len

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