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Wow, So Great

Wow, so great 
To watch the orb
And feel the flame 
Come to sleep 
On your lovely lips

Wow, so great
To sit on benches 
In July morn 
When the sky greets 
The trees, the flowers and tares
 
And touch
Your soul— 
As it begins to sparkle
On a sea, filled 
With diamonds

And wow, so great
To lay, onto the sand dunes 
And wait for 
The night to burst in orange, with you 
Whose life never been so great

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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