Wow, So Great
Wow, so great
To watch the orb
And feel the flame
Come to sleep
On your lovely lips
Wow, so great
To sit on benches
In July morn
When the sky greets
The trees, the flowers and tares
And touch
Your soul—
As it begins to sparkle
On a sea, filled
With diamonds
And wow, so great
To lay, onto the sand dunes
And wait for
The night to burst in orange, with you
Whose life never been so great
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