Woven Worlds


I walk the last mile. I don’t know when the destined call 
will come to go to God’s heavenly realm. As my eyes close 
every night, I dedicate my devout flowers and my dedicated 
twilight hours to Him. When I wake up, I thank Him for the 
gracious gift of another new sunny day…
the dark path in light
    fixed destination ordained
         obscure last abode 
contoured divine bay of bliss
disappeared footprints behind
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Fowler Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 11:47 AM
A beautiful form for a prayerful write Subimal. Congratulations! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 11:26 PM
Belated thank you, Linda.
Richards Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 1:45 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Woven Worlds – Tanka Prose contest, Subimal. Thank you for your support. Suzette
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 11:26 PM
Belated thanks for the placement. It's always a pleasure to enter your challenging contests and get your feedbacks.
Agustin Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 1:28 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 11:24 PM
Many thanks for your visit and comment.
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