Woven

Timeless abiding -
Moments of silky threads hold-
Our hearts in one string 


Inspired by Raul’s “Sentiments of the heart contest”!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/16/2010 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Laura in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/14/2010 4:07:00 AM

A very heartfelt Senryu on the symbol of oneness. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura. (^_^) Noel.

Date: 3/13/2010 7:48:00 PM

Liked the imagery in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Marty Owens

Date: 3/13/2010 6:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 6:14:00 PM

Beautifully done, this one. Congratulations, Laura!

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2010 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations Laura on your placement. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2010 3:25:00 PM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy .. and a well deserved trip to the winners circle ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/13/2010 2:59:00 PM

Laura, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Date: 3/5/2010 1:32:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Have a nice weekend. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2010 12:12:00 PM

Lovely Senryu Laura..good luck in the contest.. beautiful sentiments to read.. loving... my entry is Hallowed Hearts.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... so appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2010 8:11:00 AM

This is beautiful, Laura. I see the eternal circle of love displayed in the wedding band. Excellent entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn