Woven

Timeless abiding -
Moments of silky threads hold-
Our hearts in one string 


Inspired by Raul’s “Sentiments of the heart contest”!

devotionlovepassionsenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 16, 2010 at 4:54 AM

Congratulations on your win Laura in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

March 14, 2010 at 4:07 AM

A very heartfelt Senryu on the symbol of oneness. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura. (^_^) Noel.

March 13, 2010 at 7:48 PM

Liked the imagery in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Marty Owens

March 13, 2010 at 6:44 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 6:14 PM

Beautifully done, this one. Congratulations, Laura!

John Freeman

March 13, 2010 at 5:41 PM

Congratulations Laura on your placement. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 3:25 PM

Congrats Laura on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy .. and a well deserved trip to the winners circle ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

March 13, 2010 at 2:59 PM

Laura, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

March 5, 2010 at 1:32 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Have a nice weekend. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2010 at 12:12 PM

Lovely Senryu Laura..good luck in the contest.. beautiful sentiments to read.. loving... my entry is Hallowed Hearts.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... so appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2010 at 8:11 AM

This is beautiful, Laura. I see the eternal circle of love displayed in the wedding band. Excellent entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn