Wounded Whisper

In the joy suffused sky of my fervent freedom, I let the enraptured heart’s lured songbird soar high, glide in the spring-rippled amorous breeze that carried your fleeting jasmine fragrance to me. Charmed by your charisma I sang the song of yearning, until the splitting thunder storm of strife surged in from your illusive horizon receding to obscurity, the wrench of desertion crushed the wings of love. The crippled bird folded the collapsed wings, painfully crumpled like the wilted summer flower. My mangled mind endured the pangs of isolation in the ruined nest made of twig called emotion. What in the end you remembered of me… an impaled bird lost in the deep blue oblivion, failing to fly in your far away sky, the pain of broken heart turned into wounded whisper. _____________ May 25, 2023 Theme chosen : Wounded Whisper Contest : This Or That, Vol. 18 Sponsored by : Edward Ibeh
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Miller Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on your top win, a wonderful write!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Thank you, Terry for your encouraging comment.
Ibeh Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Just a superb piece with captivating imagery throughout, Subimal. A beauty, for sure. Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, Edward for the placement.
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