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Wouldn'T You

wouldn't you rather win, would you rather lose succeed than fail rise above than get left behind wouldn't you rather love and not be hurt laugh and not not be weary cry but tears of joy be happy without sadness creeping around the corner wouldn't you rather be rich than poverty stricken quiet than to voice most opinions wouldn't you rather be positive than let negative overwhelm you it all a choice individual principality the way life is without questions, without definite nothing is concrete until you add the main ingredients. ChloeJames 2014

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 10:21:00 PM

Chloe, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2014 2:03:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Chloe - I choose your first great and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)