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Would You Still Say Hello

May I ask you something ? 
Something that has been bothering me much lately , 
Something rather daunting  .
Could  we  be friends if I were poor ?
Could  we  be friends if I were not one of your own ?
Could we  laugh  at our joys and happiness together   ? 
Would you be here at my darkest moments?
Could  you have seen past my colour and still said hello ? 
My colour does not define me , 
Nor my looks tell you nothing of me,
My race and my beliefs are what I’m made of , 
Without my beliefs , where do I stand ? 
All I ask of you is to treat me equal as to one of your own ,
If this little  favour  I ask of you may seem like a vex, 
Or may even  put you in a predicament state  , 
Then I ask of you to look back at yourself , 
At your love ones, 
Being  judged  on her  colour , 
On her   looks and on her   faith . 
Now , 
Would you still  say hello?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 3:03 PM
deep write
A   Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Pavitra, heart felt.... xox..Linda
Gabriella Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 4:39 PM
This is a really moving piece. Such depth in these words. Nice job!
Muthiah Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 7:43 AM
thank you very much . :) it came from my heart :)
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