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Would You Still Say Hello

May I ask you something ? Something that has been bothering me much lately , Something rather daunting . Could we be friends if I were poor ? Could we be friends if I were not one of your own ? Could we laugh at our joys and happiness together ? Would you be here at my darkest moments? Could you have seen past my colour and still said hello ? My colour does not define me , Nor my looks tell you nothing of me, My race and my beliefs are what I’m made of , Without my beliefs , where do I stand ? All I ask of you is to treat me equal as to one of your own , If this little favour I ask of you may seem like a vex, Or may even put you in a predicament state , Then I ask of you to look back at yourself , At your love ones, Being judged on her colour , On her looks and on her faith . Now , Would you still say hello?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/4/2016 3:03:00 PM
deep write
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Date: 9/13/2013 9:36:00 AM
Pavitra, heart felt.... xox..Linda
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:39:00 PM
This is a really moving piece. Such depth in these words. Nice job!
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Pavitra Muthiah
Date: 7/23/2013 7:43:00 AM
thank you very much . :) it came from my heart :)

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