Would You Still Love Me

Would you still love me
If i was a tree
And instead of my leaves being yellow or orange
It was black and lifeless
With leaves that fail to plummet
During the fall

Would you still love me
If instead of being full of sparkling flakes
With white blissfulness that resembled pure innocence
I'm filled with spiced, dark
Almost polluted snowfall
During the winter

Would you still love me
If instead of being filled with pastel newborn life
Flourishing with unchanging breeze
I was filled with suspenseful thunder
Sweeping away the blossoming birth of peace
During the spring

Would you still love me
If instead of a vibrant sun baked colors
With heavenly refreshing Popsicle's
I was filled with a burning hazy heatwave
With long, desperate hours
During the summer

Would you still love me
If the seasons turned into unpredictability
With a sense of despair
If instead of having four
There is just endless frustration and anger, lingering through
Penetrating even the most innocent

Would you still love me
If it became so broken its ill 
Searching for what's right
With pieces held together with tape and glue
Where taste, smell, touch, sight and what we hear still makes no sense
What if the seasons are us

12/07/2018 
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/29/2019 4:24:00 PM
heartfelt// and beautifully done. I hope you continue to write and share what’s in mind. Authentic and perfectly worded// keep posting!
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Date: 12/31/2018 8:25:00 PM
A deep poem that feels like the slow change of the onset of a debilitating disease. I hope my interpretation is incorrect or at least it is fictional. Beautifully written.
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:42:00 AM
so heart touching feelings //beautifully penned
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:27:00 AM
Nicely done, Chassidy. Congratulations on your win in Edward's contest! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in my contest, Chassidy!:-) This is an amazing poem. Congratulations on your top win, and Merry Christmas to you!
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Date: 12/8/2018 12:39:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Chassidy. I am so glad you found us! Good luck in the contest. This poem is lovely. Keep posting.
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