Would You Marry Me Smiling

Your words has made love to me under a spell
I feel just so alive inside your love sweetheart
flying echoes within beautiful songbirds singing in the valley 
Magic  whispers you're a dream stirring silver waves silently 
enchanting warmly upon a November breeze
Oh baby over and over honey in the mind golden turns 
crystal drops splashes of happiness
Sweetest child of eternal beauty shining brightly 
on one treasure sparkling jeweled gem everlasting memory complete
Looking across the mountains searching destiny I call your name 
haunting wolf howls alighting our souls unite as one body 
Our hearts marry together sparking ignites purity
Then looking out towards the ocean hills crumbling
they begin unfolding out this vision towards the sea
I fall crashing into your space thousands of miles away
in this nutshell smiling a Renoir dream classic
your an attractive intelligent  lady kiss me quick
Who is now holding high position of royalty inside four chambers
A picture hangs sweet kissing a diamond among'st maidens
desiring  hot one rose blushing red each petal crowning
emotions of passion pure in white forever burning flames
blue inside touching you softly in a feathered touch
 In gentle soft warm flickers each a beat
gently in the wildest dreams softly sings our song
Take my heart and join it with your's darling
walk with me upon golden sands 
dancing with joy finding such a queen
I sweetly surrender to you this soul
my pact true our lovers path 
forever and always holding hands 
our destiny divine and beautiful sings


this is something I spent quite some time alone writing just finished it today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/8/2014 3:52:00 AM
wow very romantic Liam I am impressed. thanks for this poem
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 4:02:00 AM
jasmine thank you for the very beautiful dazzling comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/8/2014 2:26:00 AM
such romanticism, visions of love and longing superb dearest Liam hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 3:45:00 AM
hi linda dear pal yeah such a longing is heartbreaking wonderful comment bless you have a lovely weekend mate
Date: 11/7/2014 10:15:00 PM
you spend your time in the most beautiful of reveries!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 3:22:00 AM
andrea i live upon a hill overlooking the town at the bottom of a mountain and holding love in the heart i see the beauty alone that surrounds me wonderful comment dear pal thank you so kindly
Date: 11/7/2014 6:32:00 PM
It really deserves a favourite cause it have such beautiful images and wanton feeling..May.your heart be blessed with a beautiful queen,my good friend!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 6:54:00 PM
smiling charmaine dreams do come true in fairytales so i pray thank you dear friend very beautiful comment pal heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/7/2014 6:00:00 PM
Me Old Leprechaun Mate Liam!! Me thinks Mate that with your sparklin' green eyes and pointy ears here that you have a quite enchanting and loving piece that we make our other Mates in the Leprechaun Chorus take note!! Good on ya' Mate!! A "7" from the likes of me and a most definite FAV. Wash It Down With Irish, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 6:14:00 PM
ah thank you gary dear pal the leprechaun is dancing on the tips of his pointy shoes non stop smiling lol wonderful comment thumbs up heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/7/2014 5:18:00 PM
This very loving piece flies in the wings of love and angels Liam.Very beautiful and romantic! I really love it! :) love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 5:55:00 PM
thank you dorian for the sweet very beautiful comment bless you heartfelt appreciated dear friend
Date: 11/7/2014 9:08:00 AM
Nicely done! I one line that I thought was masterful was "royalty inside four chambers" such a great image and play on the heart structure and the royalty of a lady and her castle. Love is the eternal song and your poem has added a sweet harmony to the music.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 2:31:00 PM
david thank you so kindly love always draws eternally beautiful its purity in the end shines through wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 11/7/2014 7:52:00 AM
- "Kiss me quick" so I wake up to reality .... :)) ...after dreaming me totally far away in your beautiful poem Liam !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/7/2014 8:07:00 AM
smiling anne lise wonderful comment dear pal thank you so kindly bless you have a great weekend
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