Would You Like To Go To Bed

Well pleased to meet you Would you like to go to bed Result was a slap © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 11:23 PM
haha. Funny one, Jack!
Ellison Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Happy to see you giggling dear Andrea! Love, Jack xxx
Breidenthal Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Too funny Jack! I love this funny senyru!!! I am so sorry I haven't been visiting as often!! This weekend I'm heading up North to visit my grandfather, but once I get back, I will be reading a lot from your page. Love you dear and I am so proud of you and the progress you're making! You are simply amazing!! Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Now how can I possibly respond to that without getting all gushy! I love you dearest Laura! Certainly no need to apologize sweet lady! I love you a whole big bunch and will patiently wait to hear from you no matter how long it takes! I am so fortunate to have such a sweet, warm friend like you! Must have done something good on my life to have so a sweetie! I love you Laura... xxx
Eastman Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 10:14 AM
I wouldn't slap you SenyruJack... But sorry... gave my heart to Hubby... Still following him thru the years... and that ice cream he gets me every weekend at McDonnalds... LOL.
Ellison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Thought I'd give it a shot, dear Carol! LOL xxxx
Konos Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 8:07 AM
That's just something you "overheard" Jack....none of those ladies looked at Jack and said No of course you were more discreet ...now let's hear the real stories Jack......
Ellison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Okay, okay, a few said "let's see what you've got, mister"!!! To which I replied, "I'm a novice, so you'll have to 'guide' me along!" Love, Jackson xxx
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:29 AM
lol no wonder:-) hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Never did learn how to score with the ladies!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx
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