Would you let me know?

Would you let me know?
If trying to show you the outer rounds of heaven don't,
keep me on the charm offensive anymore.
If you fail to see me as the one-man, who finds you worth fighting for...

Then I'd give anything, to temper your belief in all the promises I've made before
Replacing all doubt with absolute certainty

Still, I worry not, because knowing you is feeling a love given with grace
In your arms sadness is destroyed and replaced— by your affection for me

And if I had never felt your presence, I would've lived out life like I was missing limbs... for you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 12:39 PM
Hello Anonomus, Scorpio, this is so romantic. Hugs. / Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Yes a.A. You are right. oh by the way a.a. I now have a cat. I got heer on Tuesday. i thought i would let you know. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Scorpio Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 2:24 PM
The best thing about being loving, is it doesn't require permission. Just boundaries. Regards A.S
Hind Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Very emotional, especially the ending here, A.S. A beautiful well done!!
Scorpio Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:28 PM
Thank you dear one! Warmly A.S.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Hello Annomous Scorpio, He is not worse it. Let him go. You can do better. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Hello Annomous Scorpio, thankyou. Sincerly yours, /Darlene/
Scorpio Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 11:23 AM
:) Appretiate you Darlene! Sincerly A.S.
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