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Would you let me know?

Would you let me know? If trying to show you the outer rounds of heaven don't, keep me on the charm offensive anymore. If you fail to see me as the one-man, who finds you worth fighting for... Then I'd give anything, to temper your belief in all these promises Replacing all doubt with absolute certainty Still, I worry not, because knowing you is feeling a love given with grace In your arms sadness is destroyed and replaced— by your affection for me And if I had never felt your presence, I would've lived life like I was missing limbs for you...

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Date: 6/29/2025 12:39:00 PM
Hello Anonomus, Scorpio, this is so romantic. Hugs. / Darlene/
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/29/2025 2:24:00 PM
The best thing about being loving, is it doesn't require permission. Just boundaries. Regards A.S
Date: 6/28/2025 11:52:00 AM
Very emotional, especially the ending here, A.S. A beautiful well done!!
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/28/2025 1:28:00 PM
Thank you dear one! Warmly A.S.
Date: 6/28/2025 11:20:00 AM
Hello Annomous Scorpio, He is not worse it. Let him go. You can do better. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/28/2025 11:52:00 AM
Hello Annomous Scorpio, thankyou. Sincerly yours, /Darlene/
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/28/2025 11:23:00 AM
:) Appretiate you Darlene! Sincerly A.S.

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