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Would You

If you knew me for just me The being deep inside Timid and detached The emotional being inside me, Would you? If you knew me for just me The being deep inside Insensitive and reticent The unwitting being inside me Would you? If you knew me for just me The being deep inside me Impassive and plain The opposite of the outward me Would you still accept me? Would you?

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Vera Duggan

Date: 11/16/2015 6:33:00 PM

Hi Lydia, this is lovely, yes I would accept you if I knew you, hope you are well, take care...............Vera

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/16/2015 10:02:00 PM

I am delighted to hear that Vera! And that you passed by and read me and left your kind comment is enough proof dear :) :) Hope to be friends and read more of each other. Regards, Lydia.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 11/15/2015 5:11:00 AM

Very good, i really liked the repeatitive lines.

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/15/2015 5:33:00 AM

Thanks a bunch Mustapha for reading me! :)