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Would that all be silent

Oh, would that all be silent Save for those that ain’t And those who cannot write Be left alone to paint As I struggle with the syllables Shouting that “I cain’t”. But then again Some noise is fine Not so much yours But more so mine Perhaps, a twisted “turn of phrase” To set a lover’s heart ablaze Or stir the listless, idle mob Into a chanting, mindless rage For all our words are double barbed Depending on which edge is carved And who it is they wish to hook With twisted lies, and yellowed book For if silence be the loudest tone We all become the garden Gnome A clown to fill an empty spot For we once were but now are not Yet silence is a sacred thing But without voice it cannot sing Call a lover’s name or shout The rope just broke,,,,,LOOK OUT….LOOK OUT

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Date: 1/23/2024 9:01:00 PM
I laughed out loud at these lines - an unexpected surprise, 'For if silence be the loudest tone We all become the garden Gnome.' It sounded like a spell with paradox. 'Pause' isn't a very attractive word, but a wise message I'm hearing - silence with anticipation. I like how you used the beat to keep a fast 'talkative' speed for irony/ humour.
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Date: 1/21/2024 8:31:00 AM
an intriguing read, John...lots to chew upon this morning. thanks for sharing your thoughts and creativity
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Date: 1/19/2024 2:48:00 PM
A well written poem. I continue to digest it. All I know is that I have to watch my tongue.
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Date: 1/19/2024 8:16:00 AM
Your poetry never fails to make me think in double time. Some words may be meant as barbs, but often they are mistaken to be written to injure emotions. It's better not to stir the pot when in doubt... Calling to mind the Three Wise Monkeys.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2024 3:24:00 PM
I think, therefore I am? haha Also the three amigos. I was thinking about the monkeys... see no evil, hear no evil, ...
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John Lawless
Date: 1/19/2024 3:14:00 PM
Well Lin, this poem is a rousing success for if a poem engenders the machinations of thought I consider it so. I don't know about the "threes" the three wise men, the three billy goats gruff, the three monkeys, the three stooges

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