Would Sad Sound Like

The sound would be rain on a cloudy day.
Or someone has an argument just to say.
The sound would be a rhythm of blues.
With notes that has no point of views.
Sound like loud stomps walking away.
And grunts that disobey.
A loud crash makes your heart beat fast.
And makes you say words in a gasp.
Or sounds like mutters in the back.
This shows me interest that lack.
Sadness is one sound that everyone goes by.
It’s the sound of people saying goodbye.
Like a question that has no meaning.
Or an accident that people are seeing.
The sound of sadness is losing.
And not making a right choosing.
Or a person stuck in bed.
Has an injury on the head.
But I think the worse sound of sadness is.
No sound in the deep abyss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 5, 2011 at 10:18 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Reynaldo. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2011 at 2:01 AM
awesome write full oF SOMETHING unique and one of a kind... ^-^junjun
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