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Would It Seem Odd

I am in a restaurant booth alone, reading. A happy voice uplifts. "Found a snake in my bed, just a little one. A garter snake". I stop reading and listen. They are in the next booth. Her friend says nothing. I feel disappointment that I cannot see their faces. He has the biggest…..giggle. Giggle.Giggle. I struggle to hear more, but alas, they are even quieter. Suddenly a loud shriek of laughter. Would it seem odd if I were to join them? Probably…

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Date: 6/7/2022 9:24:00 PM
Odder still -- if they were two snakes. ~ LM ASP Off
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/7/2022 10:22:00 PM
Love the "asp" part
Date: 6/7/2022 9:01:00 AM
You could always say, "I couldn't help but overhear...so, how did it all end?" They'll look at you sort of funny, but who cares?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/7/2022 10:22:00 PM
True enough
Date: 6/7/2022 3:24:00 AM
Be the people you want to be!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/7/2022 10:22:00 PM
I always am

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