Would He....If I Were!!

Would he, If I were
be there for me

Would he , If I were
really care for me

Would he, If I were
ever hurt me

Would he, If I were
soon desert me

Would he, If I were
make demands of me

Would he, If I were
take a stand with me

Would he, If I were
walk out on me

Would he, If I were
hit or shout at me

Would he, If I were
try to comfort me

Would he, If I were
simply run from me

Would he, If I were
blame it all on me

Would he, If I were
take the fall with me

Would he, If I were
soon betray me

Would he, If I were
grow to hate me

Would he, If I were
kindly hold me

Would he If I were
take is slowly

Would he If I were
run away and hide

Would he, If I were
simply force himself to cry

Would he, If I were 
take responsibility

Responsibility...would he take
Would he, If I were
face reality

Would he? Would.... he?
If I Were....
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Date: 1/8/2009 11:17:00 PM
Yes, great piece of Work this is. well done and welcome to poertysoup please read, comment on any my poems and thank you for the comments.
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Date: 1/5/2009 6:13:00 AM
Hi Tyesha! Welcome to PoetrySoup and thank you for all those lovely comments. I feel you have asked deeply important and emotional questions here. The repetition strongly enhances just how powerful these answers will be to you. Well done and good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:04:00 PM
wow, dramatic and deep and ask a question and makes you wonder huh? enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS....
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:44:00 AM
Hi Tyesha - Another deeply personal poem - Your strength in revealing who you are and expressing your heart & soul is truly a gift - Don't ever let anyone lay hands on you - life's way to short to let folk beat on you Great poem - God Bless, MJ p.s. you should read some of my friend Sharon's work for she is in a class all her own
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