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Worthy of Pause

Carolina wren lifts fluted song
skyward
in a forest spotlight
breezily pitched
               like an opera worth staging
               a sentiment of joy
its cheeky self
              when measuring reserve
a song, over-stuffed
poised cliffhanger 
              from a winged vagabond 
              its agile volley of survival

wren
of brisk longing
               that peeks through green
               that breaks our corset-like indifference 
buoyant chatter
       that inhabits a small world detachment
choral company to dappled light
diva-like
bound
          to the heated stillness of summer




Poem composed July 26/2022
Revised November 11/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/10/2022 8:59:00 PM
So many memorable lines in this lovely verse, corset-like indifference, heated stillness of summer. I can just feel the torpor! Elizabeth
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/11/2022 3:44:00 PM
Very kind if you to comment favorably on my posting. Be well. Brian
Date: 8/3/2022 1:09:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Brian. Love the 'dappled light' and more. Harry
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/3/2022 10:10:00 AM
Greetings Harry, Hope all is well with you. Thanks very much for your stop by + encouraging note. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 7/30/2022 4:22:00 PM
Nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, for giving my NA Poem a second chance with recognition in your contest. Be well. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 7/27/2022 1:14:00 PM
A wren having a whimsical lark, crisp and delightful. Robert
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/27/2022 6:20:00 PM
My appreciation for your drop by + supportive comment. It is indeed a "whimsical" piece to borrow your words. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/27/2022 2:08:00 AM
Worthy of more applause I would have thought Brian. A great read. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/27/2022 6:44:00 AM
Greetings Gary. I like your word play with the title. Thank you for your vote of confidence. Hope that you are well. Brian
Date: 7/25/2022 12:46:00 PM
this was lovely! esp. love the last lines of both stanzas :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/25/2022 3:56:00 PM
Thanks very much, Susan, for your supportive comment. Best wishes, Brian

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