Worthy of a majuscule

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Have I ever wasted words on lower-cases and capitals? Laying beneath cool ground spring, waiting in its vestibules Happiness can be found loving this Earth for its residuals Toothpicks of this stand; reaching for heaven in tones, sepia 'Til they're filled with what's beneath me; green colors plethora Flowers soon will be dancing on this bed; just as they have before One cool soft rain from nature's mother; this landscape will live once more Against sky-blue tapestry; worthy of a majuscule A moment infrangible; in my record, no-way minuscule

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/12/2024 4:27:00 AM

Beautiful poem and how creatively youve expressed here. Especially the opening lines really stood out for me “ have i ever wasted words on lower cases and capitals” such a creative way to phrase your question, i always love a poem with questions. And i love the ending too flowing with hope and light “ Flowers soon will be dancing on this bed; just as they have before“ soul warming to read that. Pleasure reading your poem flowing in such eloquence.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/12/2024 9:50:00 AM

Thank you for the exquisite compliments! I.E. fun, fact, I was literally laying on the flower bed in front of my house. Looking up at the maple trees in my front yard when I took that picture and wrote this poem. Wamest regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/11/2024 6:03:00 PM

Parts of the whole, every season... a breathtaking perspective, dear friend... <3 Hugs

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/11/2024 6:23:00 PM

You have an uncanny ability to be a wanted voice, when I want to be heard the most! Hugs right back! A.S