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Worth the Time

I reach my hand to you Know my heart is offered too In faith and trust of friendship We begin our new journey Please be gentle is my plea Relationships take time
written: 9-2-2019 copy right protected Siku form 6,7,6,7,7,6 syllables in 6 lines (my form)

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Date: 9/6/2019 4:43:00 AM
"relationships take time" - I want to put this on a billboard and put it in every person's mind.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:54:00 AM
What a great idea Caren! xoxox
Date: 9/3/2019 7:56:00 AM
Jeanne, thank you for introducing me to the Siku form. It reminds me of a Tanka (5,7,5,7,7) with an extra line. I'll have to try it. ~Mark
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Mark...it's been fun to work on. I prefer shorter poems but wanted some form that had a nice flow and gave you enough syllables to work with...I love the Tanka/Haiku forms so borrowed from those.
Date: 9/3/2019 2:05:00 AM
I like your form Jeanne, well done.
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Date: 9/2/2019 3:02:00 PM
Relationships really do take time Jeanne. Nicely written...Ron x
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Ron. Thank you for stopping by for a read.
Date: 9/2/2019 1:50:00 PM
Nice one Jeanne, written with heartfelt sentiments - thoroughly enjoyed. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:51:00 AM
May you have friendships full of love and strength...Thanks for your read.
Date: 9/2/2019 1:07:00 PM
A lot of time...for love can't be rushed...Nice one
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2019 7:49:00 AM
thank you Arturo. Nice to see you again.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:16:00 AM
I like YOUR form and the form of sincere gentleness within your form. It is realistically sweet and from the heart. All the best ... CayCay
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/2/2019 11:19:00 AM
thanks so much! It's been fun to play with.

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