Jeanne Mcgee Poet Free verse

Worth the Time

I reach my hand to you
Know my heart is offered too
In faith and trust of friendship
We begin our new journey
Please be gentle is my plea
Relationships take time


written:  9-2-2019
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Siku form  6,7,6,7,7,6 syllables in 6 lines (my form)

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Caren Krutsinger September 6, 2019 at 4:43 AM "relationships take time" - I want to put this on a billboard and put it in every person's mind. Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2019 at 7:54 AM What a great idea Caren! xoxox

Mark Toney September 3, 2019 at 7:56 AM Jeanne, thank you for introducing me to the Siku form. It reminds me of a Tanka (5,7,5,7,7) with an extra line. I'll have to try it. ~Mark Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2019 at 7:54 AM Thanks Mark...it's been fun to work on. I prefer shorter poems but wanted some form that had a nice flow and gave you enough syllables to work with...I love the Tanka/Haiku forms so borrowed from those.

Elizabeth Kinch September 3, 2019 at 2:05 AM I like your form Jeanne, well done.

Ronald D Thompson September 2, 2019 at 3:02 PM Relationships really do take time Jeanne. Nicely written...Ron x Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2019 at 7:51 AM Thanks Ron. Thank you for stopping by for a read.

Jennifer Proxenos September 2, 2019 at 1:50 PM Nice one Jeanne, written with heartfelt sentiments - thoroughly enjoyed. Hugs, Jennifer. Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2019 at 7:51 AM May you have friendships full of love and strength...Thanks for your read.

Arturo Michael September 2, 2019 at 1:07 PM A lot of time...for love can't be rushed...Nice one Jeanne Mcgee September 6, 2019 at 7:49 AM thank you Arturo. Nice to see you again.

CayCay Godwin September 2, 2019 at 11:16 AM I like YOUR form and the form of sincere gentleness within your form. It is realistically sweet and from the heart. All the best ... CayCay Jeanne Mcgee September 2, 2019 at 11:19 AM thanks so much! It's been fun to play with.