Get Your Premium Membership

Worth the Climb

Who can un-travel the journey of love of a thousand and one contradictions of moments more - then less than enough the weapon for a minds ammunition for all get wounded in the unsought war the plight of being shot by friendly fire eye on the enemy while at the door lie the unsuspecting repercussions of desire Much like soldiers fully geared suited with the warfare of Cupid It's not just the suffering that we fear but the suffering because we were stupid There's more to marriage than want of bliss, more than euphoric kiss lest it leave you with no more than a vestige one must weigh their hope with the risk And so with cautious heart we trod this road we cannot un-travel and hope beyond hope there is a God for loves journey is a fragile battle It can crush and it can kill or make all your dreams sublime make no mistake this journeys uphill but in the end you can only hope... it's was every bit worth the climb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/7/2014 7:30:00 AM
Very wise my dearest Sarai! It is surely worth the climb! We must never give up on love, it could be just beyond the next hill! I send you my love across the miles sweet Sarai XOXOXOX
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 5/8/2014 3:24:00 PM
Even though my hill feels more like a mountain? Lol Just playing.... Love ya sweetie. Thanks for dropping by, always. Hugs XOXOX
Date: 5/7/2014 7:11:00 AM
It is worth the climb, in fact if we allow it too, love can lift us well beyond the mountain tops. God is indeed beyond hope, he is both the source of it and the manifestation of Love. This is an exceptional piece that floods me with many thoughts and emotions.
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 5/8/2014 3:22:00 PM
This is truly my hope Rick. So glad it ministered to you. Take care my friend! Hugs
Date: 5/6/2014 8:11:00 AM
WOW!!! and I thought I was good!! very much enjoyed this! speaks a lot of truths of love, broken love and life in general, thank you for sharing this great write! Peace :)
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 5/7/2014 3:20:00 AM
What a thoughtful comment Eric, thank you so much. This poem reflects all to much the realities of love in my own life. I'm off to visit your page as well.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things