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I Love you, I love you with all my might,
So much I think I shall perish with the force
The rain reminds me of those endless games under the sun,
A ***** paradox; but the stance is one.
My heart, a ship, a carved cavern now,
Your winds, your sails, mutate me how.
The universe quivers under the pressure I presume,
as you are yet to poison from the golden loom.
But sight had escaped me quite in rudiment, it had
The only light allowed was your selfless to my bad.
The heat, it still knocks me on all my pawny fours
I know it’s still dew and dusk will bring back the force.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 2/21/2016 11:09:00 AM
Saanika Jha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:27:00 PM
S JHA, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 8/25/2014 10:58:00 AM
Saanika, nice write my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Saanika Jha
Date: 8/25/2014 7:38:00 PM
For sure :) thankyou for your encouraging words
Date: 8/18/2014 11:37:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, powerful, romantic write that I truly enjoyed. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita
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Saanika Jha
Date: 8/25/2014 7:38:00 PM
Date: 8/16/2014 10:47:00 AM
Beautiful, this flowed like a river and was a pleasure to read!
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Saanika Jha
Date: 8/17/2014 5:06:00 AM